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You're sick and you're weak
And now you're wearing thin
Now the rumors they leak
And eat out from within

What you're fighting's an illness
It's not all in your head
But I know you can do this
Ignore the lies that are spread

Hold on for the finish
'Cause you've been through the wars
And I know you can do this
'Cause you've done it before
Just be strong and keep fighting
'Cause I need you around
It's through you the light seeps in
And without you I'd drown
I would drown in the darkness
If you drown in the pain
I know you can beat this
You can beat it again

You've been changing in clear view
You've been falling apart
I've seen all that you've been through
And it's broken my heart

I'm your shoulder to lean on
I'll be your priest in a box
I'll try my best to be strong
'Cause I know what you've lost

See you forcing it in, hear you forcing it out
Scratching out from deep within, fed by hate and self doubt
Love your eyes though you're tired
Love your bones though you're weak
From within this transpired
But it's something you'll beat  

Hold on for the finish
'Cause you've been through the wars
And I know you can do this
'Cause you've done it before
Just be strong and keep fighting
'Cause I need you around
It's through you the light seeps in
And without you I'd drown
I would drown in the darkness
If you drown in the pain
I know you can beat this
You can beat it again

I'll smile when you're smiling
I'll sleep once you're safe
I'll rest once you're rising
And I'll love what you hate
You might hate your body
But I love every part
You might want to say sorry
But I won't let you start
You might hate yourself now
But I love who you are
In this sickness you won't drown
'Cause I'll make the seas part

Please hold on for tomorrow
Try to fight all the doubt
Now I want you to know
You make me nothing but proud

You're the strongest that I know
And you're good to the core
Being eaten by sorrow
But I won't let you fall
Just be strong and keep fighting
'Cause I need you around
It's through you the light seeps in
And without you I'd drown
I would drown in the darkness
If you drown in the pain
I know you can beat this
You can beat it again
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fidele7684 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2011  Student Filmographer
beautiful,emotional,sad but still very powerful,the trust worthiness you transmit through words and heart felt expressions
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B-U-Ts Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you =)
This was quite a sad one, but, glad you liked it!
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fidele7684 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Student Filmographer
yeah i have noticed but i still love it
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ink-eternity Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This poem is amazing. It truly touched me, it's so sad but I love it.-nods-
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B-U-Ts Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you very much, I am very glad you liked it!
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ink-eternity Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
no prob.^^
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blackstar707 Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautifully written! This brings back some memories of a friend who went through the same ordeal, and she pushed me away when all I wanted to do was help her get through her pain.

Keep up the great work! :clap:
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B-U-Ts Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you very much, although I do hope you're friend recovered in the end. Glad you liked it =)
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