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My heart is cracked and it's leaking
It's leaking all over this page
And I stutter but I'm not speaking
Stutter in the words I write again

It's as if my mind's been shot
Been shot right onto the screen
And I'm not asking a lot
It just takes one second to read

And my tears are not water
They are ink on the page
This isn't something I've thought of
It's simply how I have changed
My breath is shaking as it's leaving my chest
And the keys are tapping always in sync with it
It's my feelings I'm writing, it won't be like the rest
My own version, it's my very own personal lit

I could cut my wrists to let it out
But I want the pain as the ink spills
And it hurts more to write it down
It's like the most bitter of pills

And I find myself wondering
If you'll maybe read this one day
And I find myself pondering
If I really care anyway

And my tears are not water
They are ink on the page
This isn't something I've thought of
It's simply how I have changed
My breath is shaking as it's leaving my chest
And the keys are tapping always in sync with it
It's my feelings I'm writing, it won't be like the rest
My own version, it's my very own personal lit

Pen to paper it's magnetic
Like blades across the skin
But this self loathing, it's pathetic
I'm starting over from within

You'll never read these words
Because you never even cared
We live in different Worlds
And you seem so care impaired

So I'm taking pen to paper
But, I'm not doing it for you
And I'll get better later
Because now I know the truth
You're a cold and empty soul
And really you're not worth my time
And I know I'll find another girl
But good luck finding a good guy
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createdwithpassion Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
very descriptive! awesome!
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B-U-Ts Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you =)
Pleased you liked it!
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createdwithpassion Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :D
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amazinglyashlynn13 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
This is a very interesting and long comment comversation. I'm impressed :P
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B-U-Ts Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh yes, I can talk for Britain at times, and I type like that too. I should really warn people of that =P
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amazinglyashlynn13 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I am the same way with words. I'm not good with music. Someday I may be able to, but not today. I rhymed. Unintentional. :P
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B-U-Ts Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011  Student General Artist
Haha I'm sos bad with music, probably literally tone deaf in fact!
And I liked your rhyme =)
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amazinglyashlynn13 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks. I try. I can sing. But I don't have my own voice. When I sing, I only match my voice to the radio or my iPod. Someday I will maybe write music to go with my voice :)
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B-U-Ts Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011  Student General Artist
Haha, I have to admit I do that too, my accent, tone, etc, everything changes when I (attempt to) sing, matching the artist whose song it is ... Sometimes it is very interesting =P
Keep writing =)
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amazinglyashlynn13 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I don't know what I am doing when I sing. I would like to someday. My stepfather may teach me one day. Thanks to my mother, I can do a British and am working on my Scotish accent. My apologies for the randomness. I have a bunch of different thoughts to say and they aren't always related. :P
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