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The day that you died was the day I collapsed
I've stayed down on the floor
You're not coming back

If I never get up, then I can't fall again  
I miss you so much
The world took my friend

When I am alone I cry and I yell
They sent you to heaven
And left me in hell

And I need a friend right now most of all
But you are not here
There's no one to call

I was right there, the day that you died
Right next to you
On the passenger side

Your side it crumbled with you in its grasp
I don't know what happened
It went by far too fast

I was there the day you were put in the ground
So many people showed up
You would have been proud

Every day I can't believe you're still gone
When I visit you now
I play your favorite song

Sometimes I hope that you're looking down
My life is changing
And I hope that you're proud

Because knowing you, changed me so much more
You were my best friend
All through school and before

No one will replace you and the laughs that we had
Or the pranks that we pulled
That made our parents so mad

I'll always remember you and the person you were
How you couldn't play football
Even your drunken slur

We grew up together, we grew up as a pair
I'll meet you in heaven
Just as soon as I'm there
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dessy166 Featured By Owner May 15, 2011
That was an amazing poem. Very powerful.
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B-U-Ts Featured By Owner May 16, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you very much, and thank you for the favourites also, I really appreciate it.
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dessy166 Featured By Owner May 16, 2011
No problem.
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Emotastic-chik5 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
incredibly sad =( I love it
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B-U-Ts Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you.
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Emotastic-chik5 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome =)
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Soul-Reader Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2011   Writer
This is very moving...powerful words here. I'm sorry that this happened to you :heart:
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B-U-Ts Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you, on all accounts, I really appreciate it.
I write about it a lot, and that has oddly helped, I'm just glad that people don't moan that I'm always writing about the same kind of things.
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FadingAqueous Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Its so sad but so sweet. Beautiful
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B-U-Ts Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2011  Student General Artist
Thank you. I appreciate it and I'm glad you liked it.
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